[Fanfic] Waiting on Forever (12/12)

[flyingfortress]

Title: Waiting on Forever
Genre: Angst, hurt/comfort, fluff
Pairing(s)/Characters: USUK. Brief mentions of fem!Canada and others.
Rating: PG13
Warning(s): Alternative universe. Brief sensuality.
Summary: In death, Alfred F. Jones relives his sixty-seven years of life. He summons memories of friendship, love, and loss, and looks for the one person who

Comments

[pixie_rings]

Thank you ever so much for this fic. It was truly a joy to read it. I love afterlife fics, and the emotion you've woven with this is wonderful. Really, thank you.

[flyingfortress]

You're very welcome! c: And thank you for reading it!

[hoshiko2]

AHHHHHHHH!!!! THERE WAS A HAPPY ENDING!

Ok, ok, I'm gonna actually, you know, leave a decent review this time, instead of my constant flailings and such.

I REALLY loved this story. It was emotional, well-written, and had such a great vibe to it. Because despite the fact it was sad and we all knew Arthur died just from the foreshadowing at the start, it was still so beautiful and lovely. And this end wrapped it all up together beautifully. To have Arthur reveal that he had been there all along, always by Alfred's side, was heart wrenching. And knowing Alfred DID get to live his life with Arthur just...
I did tear up a bit at that.

Lovely, so amazingly lovely. Let me know when you do a new series, okay? I'll read it.

[flyingfortress]

Constant flailings are still wonderful, though! I'm pleased that you liked it as much as you did. It was a task to edit it, and a bit of a challenge, but I'm glad to know it was worth it. Thank you for reading it all the way, I really do appreciate it. And, of course I will! (:

[ubermidget]

I am so happy that Alfred finally found Arthur again, I cried! Alfred getting Arthur to insult him was adorable, it was lovely to see them both familiarising themselves after such a long separation. The running off into a sun-rise is a beautiful ending.

[flyingfortress]

I couldn't leave him lingering alone! After all, he waited for so long. Crying seems to be a frequent reaction to this fic, haha. I'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless! Thank you for reading!

[lilsandstorm]

That was the perfect ending.

It is great how they both end up together again.

I cannot contain my love for this fic. Some of the earlier chapters scenes left me smiling with mush and the later more heartbreaking chapters left me rolling on the floor.

[flyingfortress]

It's sort of an emotional rollercoaster, huh? You should have seen me when I cranked his bad boy out; I went through so many moods! I'm glad the ending was to your liking. Thank you for reading it!

[ren_chan146]

This story is a gift to us all. It warmed my heart so many times and I loved reading every part of it.
You can be more then pleased with yourself. You did an amazing job here.^^

[flyingfortress]

Thank you so much! It really makes my day, knowing all of you enjoyed it as much as you did. Thank you again for commenting and reading!