[Fanfic] Waiting on Forever (8/12)

[flyingfortress]

Title: Waiting on Forever
Genre: Angst, hurt/comfort, fluff
Pairing(s)/Characters: USUK. Brief mentions of fem!Canada and others.
Rating: PG13
Warning(s): Alternative universe. Brief sensuality.
Summary: In death, Alfred F. Jones relives his sixty-seven years of life. He summons memories of friendship, love, and loss, and looks for the one person

Comments

[j_sasunaru_c]

I... I utterly need someone to hold me right now. OH dear Alfred. 45 years, and still... Arthur... at age 24.. so young...

*sobs in a corner*

[bioniceye]

Oh, Alfred. His whole life and even beyond his own death, it's Arthur that he's always thinking about. I do hope they get reunited in the afterlife. I just love that that occasional comfortable wind embracing Alfred might just be Arthur.

(If you show snippets of Alfred after Arthur's death, I think I'm gonna cry.)

[ren_chan146]

I can imagine that this was hard to write. It was already difficult to read. I barely could see the words because of all the tears running down my cheeks. This is so sad and 24 is way to young to die.
Still, it was a wonderful chapter.

[tootie_sullivan]

This is so depressingly beautiful. My heart is breaking into a million little fragments right now.

[chiisana00]

Tissue! Tissue tissue!! TT~TT

-Sob-