The Ritual

Mar 29, 2010 18:34


Title: the ritual

Pairings: yunho/jaejoong

Rating: nc-17

Genre: smut

A/N: this is a piece that would occupy a very small but special place in my mind as long as I stay in the dbsk fandom.  I had a great time reading and writing fanfics and I want to say thank you to everyone who I've met here. I'm glad to have become a dbsk fan and I want to thank them ( Read more... )

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stage_persona March 29 2010, 22:57:15 UTC
it was very nice!!!
I love the last part... tjey are no gods, sometimes we forget it right?
you did a wonderful Yunho, I imagine him just like that

good byes are sad, I hope to see you around ^^

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flyingkiwi88 March 30 2010, 05:45:38 UTC
thank you ♥ glad you liked it dear :)
hope to see you again sometime somewhere; the world is mostly vaster than we think it is but it's sometimes much smaller than we expect it to be ...so see you around!

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sidmaron March 29 2010, 23:37:14 UTC
*2 thumbs up*

Really, that was wonderful!

I wish you good luck with Real Life, stay healthy and take care.
And if you ever should feel like you have time to write sth, we will be here! ;D

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flyingkiwi88 March 30 2010, 05:56:23 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed this and thank you for your sweet words ♥ it's always nice to know there'd be someone there when you come back; not exactly 'waiting' but someone who would smile at you when he finds you're back.
good luck to you too!

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chaosmyth March 30 2010, 00:10:54 UTC
I really enjoyed reading this ♥ I've been away from DBSK fics for a long time, and your fic made me miss the times when I used to read Jaeho nearly everyday ;-;

It's sad that you've decided to stop writing completely, though D: I hope you'll find at least some time to nurture your passion :)♥

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flyingkiwi88 March 30 2010, 06:19:04 UTC
OMG!!! I'm sooo glad you liked this! cause I've read one of YOUR dbsk fics and I liked it a lot. 'Dangerous Game' was one of the first fics I came across and it really inspired me to start writing my own fics; I mean I still remember it. I'm sorry I was too shy to leave a comment -guess I didn't even have an account at that time but I'm really happy that my little story brought you back your Jaeho days :) it's a very heartwarming coincidence for me that an author who had prompted me to write fanfictions found my last story. I know, I'm making it overdramatic... but yeah, that's how much I was surprised to find your writing journal again which I'd lost track of.

yes, I'll probably find some time to go back to writing once I'm confident enough about my life and ...myself most of all.
thank you so much and hope to see you at your journal ♥

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chaosmyth March 30 2010, 12:14:52 UTC
Aww, what you said really made me happy ;____;♥ I'm glad you still remember one of my fics and especially that it was one of those that inspired you to write ♥

I haven't updated that journal in so long! But I've been getting the urge to write again, lately, and I really hope you'll get back to it too, eventually ♥♥♥

Good luck with everything :)

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itsumademo_aktf March 30 2010, 00:42:10 UTC
Perfect! Right down to the ending paragraph, which was so right!!!!

Thanks for sharing!

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flyingkiwi88 March 30 2010, 06:22:39 UTC
I'm glad you liked the last paragraph. it's basically the same for us too, isn't it?
thank you for reading and commenting :)

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flyingkiwi88 March 30 2010, 14:30:07 UTC
thank you so much Jaye ♥
even I knew you were so much younger than me, you were one of the maturest readers I had and your words always meant a lot to me. you gave me confidence, which is indeed the key in everything :)
thanks for showing interest in my future original stories; will be sure to let you know if I get sth done. and I love the quote! I'll remember it.
take care dear :D 元気でね see you at your journal!

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