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Author: clewilan
Title: Veerings
Recipient: sofiamerri
Rating: G
Characters/Pairings: Olivier Mira Armstrong, Riza Hawkeye (Rebecca Catalina, Roy Mustang)
Summary: Each step they took towards each other could lead to a sharp bend, but their lives had probably been going their own ways for too long to change directions now
Notes: I may have drifted a bit too far away

Comments

[bay115]

YESSS, some Olivier and Riza interaction! Can see their first meetings together being like that. The part where Riza talks about her "other project" and that Roy isn't what he is is my favorite. Those two would make a great team if things happened differently. Great work!

[sofiamerri]

(Oh dear, I am a mess. I accidentally submitted my comment anonymously. Here it is again. Sorry!).

I am so sorry I didn't comment sooner! I just started college and as such was terribly busy, but I absolutely loved this!
There is little to none Oliver/Riza interaction fic out there and it makes me really happy to see them being awesome together. I think my favorite part is the way Riza talks about Ishval:
"'You're that sniper girl,' she finally realized, blaming herself for not recognizing her earlier - a sad loss of time.

'She's dead a while ago, but yes, I am Riza Hawkeye,' the lieutenant conceded, expecting questions that never came."
I really like your turns of phrase, too- "expecting questions that never came," beautiful.
THANKS SO MUCH <3