Clean Hands from Shattered Glass, for shindkrow

[alice_pike]

Title: Clean Hands from Shattered Glass
Author: alice_pike
Series: First anime/CoS
Characters/Pairings: Ed/counterpart!Trisha, Ed/Hei, implied Ed/Al (before and after CoS), talk of Trisha/Hohenheim
Word Count: 4,156
Rating: NC-17
Warnings/Enticements: daddy!kink, incest of almost every possible immediate-family variety, ANGST (possibly some melodrama-

Comments

[lepharus]

Ooh, this was an interesting one. I liked how Ed's feelings kept flip-flopping between happy and angsty. I've never read a fic like this, with him and alter-Trisha (maybe because I don't look, but still) and I thought it was nicely done. I'm sure shindkrow will enjoy this. c:

[alice_pike]

Thanks so much!

I imagine that Ed's feelings were quite a mess during the CoS years, and had the potential to get a lot worse. But it's got both good and bad things, you know? So I'm glad the switching didn't seem sloppy.

I don't know that I've ever really seen one, either, but this freakin' movie gives us so many possibilities, so I kinda figured, "Why not?" I'm glad you liked it!

[sexkitten426]

This was very heavy on the angst - you've got Ed's character down perfectly. "Trisha," he says instead, and it's almost enough. <-- Brilliant line; the simplicity hides the depth of the statement. Ed/Alter!Trisha is a pairing I'd never even considered before.

[alice_pike]

Thank you so much! I'd never considered the pairing either until shindkrow requested it, but CoS offers a perfect way to do it. I'm glad you enjoyed it!