<-dying with laughter) xDDDDDDDDDDDDDD OMGGGGGG THIS MADE ME HAVE TEARS POOLING MY EYES xDDDDDD holy shitttttt
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[SPACE NEEDED!!! And no dear, NOT the empty space between your ears. You know that big bar thingie on your keyboard? USE IT!]
[OH MY GOD! THE NARRORATOR HAS TURNED INTO A DOOR BELL! I’m surprised, if I were the narrator, I would have killed myself by now.]
[WHAT glowed red? The ground? His hands? *gasp* or do you mean “it” in a suggestive way? IT GLOWED RED!!! AH!!! GET HIM TO A PROSTATE DOCTOR!!!] Emma looked down.
[At!! Charged at her. “Charged her” implies that he is going to face her in trial…which he should…maybe a few centuries behind bars will…I don’t know, FIX this Mary Sue?]
[Yes, beat him Ed, we all know you’re a child abuser. NO! try ‘Beats me’]
You turned the worst fanfic I ever read into the best critique given ever xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD ohhh, I'm continuing on the others tomorrow FOR SURE xDDDD
POOLING IN MY EYES****** ohhh shitttt, damned fanfic orz
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You turned the worst fanfic I ever read into the best critique given ever I've ever seen xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD ohhh, I'm continuing on with the others tomorrow FOR SURE xDDDD
Wow. Okay, now I know to not read any of the entries presented in this community before I write anything ._.
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[SPACE NEEDED!!! And no dear, NOT the empty space between your ears. You know that big bar thingie on your keyboard? USE IT!]
[OH MY GOD! THE NARRORATOR HAS TURNED INTO A DOOR BELL! I’m surprised, if I were the narrator, I would have killed myself by now.]
[WHAT glowed red? The ground? His hands? *gasp* or do you mean “it” in a suggestive way? IT GLOWED RED!!! AH!!! GET HIM TO A PROSTATE DOCTOR!!!] Emma looked down.
[At!! Charged at her. “Charged her” implies that he is going to face her in trial…which he should…maybe a few centuries behind bars will…I don’t know, FIX this Mary Sue?]
[Yes, beat him Ed, we all know you’re a child abuser. NO! try ‘Beats me’]
You turned the worst fanfic I ever read into the best critique given ever xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD ohhh, I'm continuing on the others tomorrow FOR SURE xDDDD
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You turned the worst fanfic I ever read into the best critique given ever I've ever seen xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD ohhh, I'm continuing on with the others tomorrow FOR SURE xDDDD
Wow. Okay, now I know to not read any of the entries presented in this community before I write anything ._.
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Thanks for the input!
Oh, and for your sporks, TOTALLY let loose, it relieves SO much stress on the head. it's really quite therapeutic!
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