Comments | fma_spork: Technical Difficulties.

nabaroo in fma_spork

Technical Difficulties.

Feb 27, 2010 14:59

demonic-muffin.deviantart.com/journal/

Comments 7

adenar February 27 2010, 20:06:05 UTC

The Sue is strong with this one.

"In a flash Kylee was back on her feet, impatiently "dancing" around the person on the floor as they rubbed their head."

I was stupid enough to think the writing wasn't even that bad up until this point. And then the awful characterisation just took over and resulted in a headdesk.

nabaroo February 28 2010, 04:40:52 UTC

Yeah, I was thinking, "Oh, maybe I misjudged you, little one. Maybe, just maybe you --- NOPE."

nabaroo February 28 2010, 05:08:43 UTC

Ew. It somehow edited itself. When I wrote she had a spelling error, she misspelled "cool", but SOMEHOW it got fixed.

mirrorvoid February 28 2010, 05:19:30 UTC

That was so horribly unimpressive I nearly died from the sheer bland stupidity.

nabaroo February 28 2010, 12:45:08 UTC

You mean the fic, I presume?

mirrorvoid March 1 2010, 10:53:19 UTC

Yes, I meant the fic. Your sporking was amusing.

nabaroo March 1 2010, 18:59:03 UTC

That's good. I felt really rusty.