O.O

[wisdom_of_youth]

Wow, no one's posted to this commute since April? Damn...
Anyhow, first ever spork. I've been meaning to put this up for a while now.

Title: The Forbidden Alchemist [[Already I hate it.]]
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4578714/1/The_Forbidden_Alchemist

Comments

[enemytosleep]

Well, technically you would only capitalize a title if it was used as part of an address. So:

The colonel sat and chewed on his pencil.

No one could procrastinate like Colonel Mustang.

But I would have to agree with the rest of your grievances.

[6eddingsfan90]

[[NO! Not the poor little eraser!!]]
XD WIN.

This damn thing is way too confusing.

[nabaroo]

I had to stop. I lost the immunity I developed with these. We need to start again. Ugh, what the hell.

Collocated...? Collo... collo... does she mean "collected"? Collocated means "to place together or in proper order; arrange side by side." I don't... I don't think the the sweat was arranged... Um.