Comments | fma_spork: I just... *sigh*

6eddingsfan90 in fma_spork

I just... sigh

Apr 20, 2011 22:36

Here is the next part of the epic tale of Star Who-Has-No-Last-Name, in which I am even more confused, I make Suethor my nemesis, the main character is a rather hostile bitch, we get a glimpse of her dark past, her parents are just as dumb as she is, the second chapter two makes an appearance, another main character's personality is ruined, and I ( Read more... )

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6eddingsfan90 April 21 2011, 20:02:03 UTC

Yeah, it is just that bad. And it gets worse.

Dude, if I ever find a way not to make it a Sue, I would totally write that story. Seriously.

Righty was being too clingy, I guess...

I will really try hard to make the next chapter readable.

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6eddingsfan90 April 21 2011, 20:18:01 UTC

Well, the hardest part would be WHY they're making fake watches. It's got to be a good reason. They could be counterfeiting them to, I dunno, break in and steal records or something? Or maybe the character is a metalworker whose friend gets arrested, so he makes a counterfeit to get into headquarters and destroy any evidence that would prove the friend guilty? idek lol, I'm just throwing stuff out there.

Oh, the writing is just atrocious.

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