ACITW AU CHAPTER 24B

[fmhartz91]

An enigma. That’s the only way Kurt can think to describe this particular phenomenon; a riddle for future philosophers to decipher. How is it that a brilliant, athletic, cultured teenaged boy, with the fishing skills of Finnick Odair and the minimalist cooking potential of an aspiring Mark Bittman, becomes thoroughly flummoxed when faced with eggs

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[ext_1376275]

So very beautiful scenes today! Love the way they both describe tiny bits of their pasts for the other, and so many visual details! I could almost see the water droplets glinting like diamonds down their bodies in the sun. *stares dreamily into the distance, too

[fmhartz91]

I am so so so sorry I didn't write a reply to your wonderful message, especially since you have been so kind to review my chapters and listen to me ramble. My alerts decided to no longer alert me for some reason, and I'm not on LJ as often as I am every where else. That said, I'm glad you liked this chapter. I was kind of inspired with the visuals of Sebastian swimming by my own husband, who's 6'8" and a swimmer and looks a bit like Michael Phelps (hence the reference :D ) I do intend on writing a sort of epilogue to this where we get to see what happens to the boys after summer, maybe even after college. I'm playing with some options. Cacophony intended this to be a Kurtbastian endgame story, and I would like to keep to the spirit of her original plan ;D

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter and thank you so much again for your lovely comments and compliments. I hope you get the chance to read the new chapter, and I hope you enjoy that one as well ;)

[bella526]

Loved these last chapters- it makes me long for summer! :)

[fmhartz91]

I am glad that it did. I live on the west coast now, but I'm trying to infuse all of my memories of east coast summers into this story as much as I can. In fact, there's going to be a very pivotal 'weather change' so to speak coming up... :D

[anonymous]

CAN'T WAIT for an update:):) you're writing is great!

[fmhartz91]

I'm so sorry I never replied to this comment, especially when you paid me such a wonderful compliment! Thank you so much for reading and I'm glad you liked it :D