Again, I am so, so, so sorry this took so long to get to you. For those fans still holding on, I hope this makes up for it, and as always I promise to do better in the future ;) ( Read more... )
Wow, this is so great! Hats off to this beautiful Au you're writing - going on after Cacophony can't be easy, but it's really good. Frankly, I'm impressed.
But since I'm always critical, I have to say that, while we all know that Kurt has issues, "your" Kurt isn't bitchy enough for me. Or strong enough, I could say - I'm not sure how to explain it. He feels too...soft, somehow.
It's only my point of view, of course, and I hope you won't take it badly - I really appreciate your work, and I'm waiting impatiantly for the next chapters^^
Re: Chap 25 Cfmhartz91August 27 2014, 21:39:00 UTC
Hello! :) I always appreciate criticism. I understand your point. A few people of emailed me with the same comment. I just want to take a moment and give you an idea of where I come from with these characters. One of the reasons why it takes me so long to update is because I am usually rewriting these chapters multiple times before you read them. I'll write a line of dialogue or an action, and then try to justify why the character would do or say that thing and whether or not it fits. Many people have commented with regard to me 'softening' these characters, and to be honest, being a human who has had experience in multiple different types of relationships with multiple different types of people, this move is a bit of a necessity. Their whole dynamic is changing. Ultra-bitchy Kurt and Super-snarky Sebastian were the people they were when they were attempting to keep each other at arm's length. But now, they're coming together, slowly breaking through barriers and walls. You can't stay rigid in your mindset while you attempt to bond
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Debido a la espera, siento que es demasiado poco, pero no te preocupes. Sin embargo, opino que fue mucho de la tormenta y un pequeño momento de real intimidad, y no me refiero al sexo; pero tu conoces a tus personajes y sabrás como encaminarlos. Fuera de que este de acuerdo con el final o no. Escribes muy bien; y pienso que este Sebastian es cada vez más humano, bajando sus barreras con cada nuevo descubrimiento. Me gusta. El episodio me dejó la nostalgia, pero siempre estaré agradecida de que continúes escribiéndolo.
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But since I'm always critical, I have to say that, while we all know that Kurt has issues, "your" Kurt isn't bitchy enough for me. Or strong enough, I could say - I'm not sure how to explain it. He feels too...soft, somehow.
It's only my point of view, of course, and I hope you won't take it badly - I really appreciate your work, and I'm waiting impatiantly for the next chapters^^
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Sin embargo, opino que fue mucho de la tormenta y un pequeño momento de real intimidad, y no me refiero al sexo; pero tu conoces a tus personajes y sabrás como encaminarlos. Fuera de que este de acuerdo con el final o no. Escribes muy bien; y pienso que este Sebastian es cada vez más humano, bajando sus barreras con cada nuevo descubrimiento. Me gusta.
El episodio me dejó la nostalgia, pero siempre estaré agradecida de que continúes escribiéndolo.
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