[Fanfic] 8 Seconds

[foldingcrane]

8 seconds

He glanced at his clock, his room, and his personal possessions.

7 seconds

He strapped on his sword, his uniform perfect.

6 seconds

He stepped out of his room, ready for battle.

5 seconds

He walked to the harbor, his mission clear.

4 seconds

“Come back safely Kanda.”

“Good luck Kanda.”

He was

Comments

[silvrguillotine]

I like this! Nicely done.

[foldingcrane]

Thank you!

[shirenai]

I think it expresses well the way it happens when Exorcists are on a mission. Especially Kanda and the fact that he doesn't care about his colleagues (at the very least, that's what I felt since you stressed on the soba, the fact that it could be the last time he ate some and not even mentionned the others is that really clear...?). Well yes, it's nicely done, I liked it :)

[foldingcrane]

Ahh... Thank you!

I'm sorry if it isn't clear, Kanda is sent on a mission with low possibility of returning [suicide mission]. The others don't know.

[shirenai]

Oh... I hadn't figured that out at all ^^,,, But reading that again, it becomes more obvious, indeed. I should have read more carefully in the first place =___= *gets out*
Feeling a bit sorry but still like it ~

[foldingcrane]

Just wondering, if I did not mention that Kanda is being sent on a suicide mission, would you have thought of it?

I mean, I am just wanting to know if I'm clear.

[silhouettedwing]

You know that you can spam this out at all the DGM comms, right?

Nice job, dear. I think my muse likes you.

[silhouettedwing]

LOL. Okay.

You're welcome!

[foldingcrane]

Ahh... I deleted the comment to make a new one?

[vivamente]

O.O

It's so straight to the heart of the matter, makes it all the more powerful.

[foldingcrane]

Thank you!