Distance

[foleyolio]

I tried to keep time with my feet. Pounding the rhythm into the sidewalk. That song I knew but couldn’t remember. I stumbled once and felt it slip away, passing cars and the change in my pockets drowning any chance of knowing

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[holls_cvfounder]

As you know, I love this part. It's been refined a lot since I saw it last too, and it's even better.

Great work baby :)

And I also dig your new user pic.

oh Erin - all is lovely

[foxynatty]

ditto on the picture darling - pictures should come out in black and white - at all times - or if we could do a little episode of Pleasantville.

Fabulous writing darling...I was wondering when my eyes would feast upon your creative prose.

I loved every word and sequence of it from the trek to his place to the kiss on calico's head.

Unrequited love - people we can't have be they unavailable emotionally and/or physically -

it's the template of all love in the world - a tunnel we all pass through.

Great job darling, keep up the amazing word my sister in prose and heartache.

Very proud of you for trekking back home.
much luv
xoxo
N

[foleyolio]

thanks girls. i know i look hot. it's my lavalife photo. haha

and thanks for the feedback. it has a little work to be done but i'm otherwise pleased.

i'm going to post it in bughatch and see what comes up.

bughatch?

[foxynatty]

huh? says the uninitiated.

Good girl for Lavalife - keep at it darling - there are def. weird men out there who find us charming and would actually deliver to our door...or is that Pizza Pizza - i forget.

Re: bughatch?

[foleyolio]

bughatch is a writing forum to which hollay and i belong. it's cool.

i'm not that into lavalife at this point but i'll get there.