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folion

The Inexcusable Absence of a Disgruntled Waiter's Tip

Mar 17, 2008 16:39

Let's see... my first short story on LiveJournal with no particular level of depth or meaning - more for a good read than anything else.

I always get a tip. Lemme say that again. I always get a tip. There has never been an interruption in my good fortune. Every customer I have served has been treated with the proper respect and dignity every ( Read more... )

the inexcusable absence of a disgruntled

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bacchae23 March 18 2008, 03:17:21 UTC

...sad, dark, yet strangely entertaining. I really feel pity for poor Tom, who did nothing more than want to have a nice Friday and have it bite him in the ass.

The ending seems a little short, but once I looked over it a second time, it fit perfectly -- you didn't need to describe what went on further than that because, well...Tom blew his stack and we know how that story will end.

Excellent voice. Strange yet fun humor. Good job, Justin.:)

folion March 19 2008, 03:23:04 UTC

Thanks you, Megan. ;)

I need to find friends on here. Writing to an audience that comes to a grand total of UNO is depressing.

bacchae23 March 19 2008, 03:40:49 UTC

Hunt 'em down, Amigo. Hunt 'em down. Another place I found has good connections is -- believe it or not -- FF.net and the dA.

Even here is good. Peruse the space of ZE INTERNETZ, read a couple of peoples' blogs and post comments (that don't sound, you know, stalker-ish) and you'll find friends.

Joining communities helps a lot, too.

Good luck. May the force be with you.