The Barber War

[folion]

(Bleh, this stupid cold is killing me.)

Young 'un and his father came and sat down, took a number - methinks, 15 customers down the line, and waited with folded arms and pinched expressions. Didn't seem particularly happy but they aren't the first ones like that, takin' into consideration how parental relationships are these days. No' exactly on the

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[bacchae23]

...sometimes what you right frightens me.

NONETHELESS: It's really impressive that you're messing with syntax and diction -- I haven't dared step into that realm yet, nor do I really want to, but I'm really impressed that you decided to put an accent in the piece.

I'm curious as to who shot whom, and also a little disturbed by the context of the story. But I suppose the Barber shop does well do exaggerate the ridiculousness of the father and son quarrel, over, of all things, HAIR.

Hopefully this hasn't happened to you.

Good story, though, Justin. It's nice to see you branching out with style and stuff. :)

[folion]

Thanks, I was just really PO'd at my stupid snot that wouldn't stop dribbling out my right nostril. So, if anything, thank the boogers.