Chess with the Devil

May 01, 2008 16:31

(Man, I feel high today. If my church saw this story, I'd be crucified before their very eyes.)

I strategically positioned my versatile queen into place, trapping my brother's cowardly king in a dark, deadly corner. Check-mate. My fifth victory in a row today. Supremacy reigned today. I smiled and crossed my arms, letting out a psuedo-yawn. "Tired ( Read more... )

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bacchae23 May 15 2008, 04:32:53 UTC
Seriously? This is brilliant. Oh, how you have twisted religion to fit your own means! 8D Totally cool story, brilliant dialogue and--of course -- the descriptions of what happens when God asomuch as twitches his nose.

Awesome. Incredibly clever.

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folion May 16 2008, 02:35:13 UTC
As always, your criticism is appreciated. :)

And I love twisting religion, just because it's so easy to do.

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