OOC: CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM
How's my driving? How can I improve with Nicanor and Bakumon? Yes, they're original characters, but are they consistent, believable, etc? How do they come across?
Also: How is my cultural understanding? I'm not Mexican, nor have I spent any longer than a week in Colorado or any time in Alabama; I'm sure American college culture is a lot different from New Zealand universities and I've never been so much as a Sea Cadet. If I've gotten something wrong, I'd love to know.
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Also: How is my cultural understanding? I'm not Mexican, nor have I spent any longer than a week in Colorado or any time in Alabama; I'm sure American college culture is a lot different from New Zealand universities and I've never been so much as a Sea Cadet. If I've gotten something wrong, I'd love to know.
Anonymous comments are on; all comments are screened.