Away at 3 short of a 60.

[followingleader]

Can we make the stars shake tonight
with the corners of our smiles.
Can we again be dare-devils, seeing
who flees the gravity of it all first.
Can I tell you, that in my little galaxy,
your all the rage.
Could I ask you, if you felt but
never voiced the same.

Comments

[lifeinreverse]

yes, of course you could.

the entire poem is "very yes," all the more so now that i understand the title. and i must say that the first two lines are especially lovely. i've said it before, but you're mesmerizing. quite.

[followingleader]

your simply too kind, really. only in your company can a flower feel comfortable enough to fully blossom, wondrous indeed, you are. thank you.

[lifeinreverse]

to say i'm hooked would be a gross understatement. how about that gravity, eh?

[followingleader]

The water is best when your beside me.