"Who Better To Love" ch. 5

[followthesun1]

Zac and Nikki: Who Better To Love ch. 5

What Happens in Vegas… But, Does It?

Disclaimer: I do not own any of the people in this story, as they are real people and that would just be wrong. But, I do really wish that I owned Zac and Nikki!

Rating: R

Please see links to the first four chapters "under the cut"

Comments

[sgh_intern]

I LOVE 'Total Eclipse of the Heart'...eighties power ballards are just WIN...

and this...

she followed his hand from her to his mouth, and he tasted her on his finger. One of his fingers in his mouth, she took the other in her mouth. Their faces were so close, both tasting her on his fingers.

...is too hot to be legal...even in Vegas.

[ashcash7]

OMG Jenn...so freakin' wonderful. LOVES it. but you didn't write the smex. POUTS..hahahaha.

and EEK..her seeing the Hawaii pics..and totally excited to see where this goes.

now my job is to bug you for Ch.6 now. haha.

o and more baththub. :D

[hairsprayx12]

Obi Wan!!! It was worth waiting 4 (yes count them 4) months for this!!

And you used Bonnie Tyler!!!! Didn't we have a convo about this song early on when I first joined ff. This song kills me!!! It is so them.

This is so much angst and so heart breaking! I was like crying about the whole people magazine thing. And damn him for sending her that post card and lying about Hawaii! For the love of cheese!

More!! More!!! More!!! And did I mention!! MORE!!!!!!!

[heartonmysl33v3]

Wasn't expecting Ashnessa. lol I wonder if Nessa is starting to get suspicious

[harry_n_ginny]

stupid Hawaii and stupid Vanessa and stupid Zac and poor Nikki :( I'm too upset to comment correctly

I loved it the smex was OMFG hottness

the Zac being an @ss not so hot >:(

the end broke my heart :(

please hurry back with more of this one..don't make us wait again :)