"Who Better To Love" ch. 5

[followthesun1]

Zac and Nikki: Who Better To Love ch. 5

What Happens in Vegas… But, Does It?

Disclaimer: I do not own any of the people in this story, as they are real people and that would just be wrong. But, I do really wish that I owned Zac and Nikki!

Rating: R

Please see links to the first four chapters "under the cut"

Comments

[musicalgirl07]

Happy with the update

:Loved smex

Want to slap Zac across the head for lying to her hope she gives him hell

[jcaddict]

Poo, LJ just ate my post! Phew, what a busy chapter with so much great movement in the story and yet, nothing changed LOL. Way to keep us wanting more! My favorite part of the chapter was when Zac asked for the night and handed Nikki her words back hoping/expecting that she would afford him the same luxury he'd given her prior. And you're killing me with the ending. NOOOOOO! Don't look Nikki. Avert your eyes!!!

[sweetanna80]

I'm glad you wrote another chapter. I feel sad for Nikki because she seems to know how she feels but Zac is really confused. I love that you included Monique, Ryan and Ben.
Good choice with the song too.
The end when she sees the pics of Hawai is sad. I can't wait to read more, what she's going to tell him and what his feelings are.

[musewriter]

Ok, first let me say that it's such a travesty that I've never read this piece before. It is brilliant, my dear Jenn.

This chapter was amazing! I felt so bad for Zac and Nikki...that they have each other in a sense but on the other hand, they don't. It's so heartbreaking to see them confused. Like they can see what's right in front of them but they can't grasp it:(.

I love that you incorporated such an amazing song!

The whole story is just totally WIN! Can't wait for the next chapter:)

[lilyloveslink]

EEEP!!!!
i cant believe it
that darn zac and his mind games

[followthesun1]

Yeah, that seems to be the consensus. Well, we'll see what happens to him in the next chapter. Which is on the way, so keep your eyes open :)