"Who Better To Love" ch. 10

[followthesun1]

Who Better To Love: Chapter 10

Roman Holiday

Disclaimer: I own nothing but myself and my own ideas.

Rating: NC-17

Please see links to the first nine chapters "under the cut"

Thanks (sort of) to Jess, for her TOUGH LOVE :P

Comments

[butterflybee260]

GAH!!!!! *thud* Zac loves Poise and Grace doesn't he!!!

The camera man at the end is WIN!!

Mel

[pearllane]

um.....

HOLY SHIT!! Jen that was freaking fantastical! Like *sigh* sooooo good! It's just insane how good that was, I love the way you write them and how they think and experience everything!! Great job as always!!

[gentlelamb]

Loved this chapter.

“But….” She couldn’t think of any words to finish that sentence, her mind was so clouded with sensations and memories.

“No butts… except this one,” he smirked between kisses, as he squeezed her ass.

“Dork,” she teased, as she fidgeted with the last closed button on his shirt.

They knelt together, on the floor of his hotel room, their shirts tossed aside. Their hands were all over each other, their tongues moving in rhythmic unison.

That entire section was sexy and fun.

“I’m cumming!” Zac shouted.

“Alright, Mr. Efron. I’ll be waiting,” the cameraman said, in a strong Italian accent.

“That’s odd, I hadn’t even knocked yet,” he thought to himself, in Italian.

That part cracked me up.

And he deleted the frames when two lovers leaned in close and shared a secret. Two lovers, obvious to anyone with a sense of romance and lust and an appreciation for a woman as full-bodied as a rich, aged chianti.

Great ending! I only started reading this type of fic recently but you have a great writing style.

[followthesun1]

I'm glad you liked the ending. That last line was one of my favourite lines I ever wrote :)

[musewriter]

Dear Jen,

I'm writing to inform you that I will be forwarding all my medical bills to you for the injuries incurred as a result of the constant thudding that occured as I read this chapter. Please pay them promptly...or just write another chapter

Ok on a more serious note....OMG that was amazing! The massage room scene!! I will NEVER be able to watch that vid of him in Rome without thinking of the scene in your fic! HOT!

And she seduced him! Holy crap! WOW! That was...perfect!!

And the ending paragraph, I LOVED IT!! What a fantastic way to close the chapter.

Absolutely amazing! More please ASAP!

[al_louise]

GAHHH!! So good.

So..um..yea...pretty hot..

She had begun to call him that after Rove. She told him that if she was Nik, he should be Zaccy. And he never minded, as long as she didn’t do it in front of anyone else.

aww lol

“We’re in Rome!” Nikki shouted, as she used both hands to push Zac in the chest. “We’re in fucking Rome!”
“I hope we’re soon fucking in Rome!” he laughed.

Oh wow. Forward much, Zac? Lol

Nothing on his mind but Nikki, and what he hadn’t been able to finish a short time earlier, he couldn’t help himself when his hand reached down to his crotch. He slid his hand inside his underwear, groaning at the sensation of his fingers as he began to stroke himself.

Oh what a visual!! *thud*

“I’m cumming!” Zac shouted.
“Alright, Mr. Efron. I’ll be waiting,” the cameraman said, in a strong Italian accent.
“That’s odd, I hadn’t even knocked yet,” he thought to himself, in Italian.

Oh god, this made me laugh so much.

Such a great chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Oh and I heart Lorenzo.