fic (tony/pepper): Perfect Little Plus-Sign (1/2)

[foolyoulove]

Title:  Perfect Little Plus-Sign (1/2)
Author:  foolyoulovesomehow (

Comments

[sunshine_minx]

"..I'd really like for our progeny to be able to count on your sanity, since mine has historically been debatable.">

and

"You deserve way more than twelve percent of the credit for this one."

This was so cute I want to squee. Seriously, I love how you handled it...and the lines? Perfect. All so much.

[foolyoulove]

Thank you so much for the sweet review! I'm especially glad you said you liked the "progeny" line... I had almost cut it because I was worried that it was a little over-the-top. :)

[darkhorse_99]

"Come again?"

"I think that's what got me into this situation."

*laughs hysterically*

This was lovely, I hope you consider writing more.

[foolyoulove]

Thank you! I hope another muse visits me soon, because I'd love to do more!

[jiraiyasgirl]

Yeah that was my fave line too!!

[luckytohaveher]

So adorable. I love their crazy brand of domesticity.

And welcome to the fandom!

[foolyoulove]

Thank you! I'm glad to be here!

[xfsista]

This is fantastic. I think you really captured their voices. Well done!

[foolyoulove]

Thank you! I loved writing their banter... I'm so glad it's paying off for the reader too. :)

[cincoflex]

terrific job! I love the banter, and the way their conversation goes from facetious to serious is absolutely them!

Bravo!

[foolyoulove]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!