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Jul 09, 2010 01:26

PROMPT POST 1

Please make sure you've read the rules post first, and play nice!

Flat comment page here just to clarify, as a few people have been asking, art fills are also very much welcomed!

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FILLED, Ballack/Podolski, NC-17, ~2000 words, part 1/3 anonymous July 20 2010, 21:45:01 UTC
I'm sorry for the possible grammar mistakes. I'm not native English speaker, especially the tenses might be wrong. Hope this is what you wanted. I'm not sure if this is exactly rough, violent or discipline, sorry. Another note, it's also quite long, 1957 words.

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Du, komm her, he had said, his voice low, his hand grabbing Lukas's sleeve. Bastian had given Lukas an apologising gaze and a shrug before taking his water bottle and leaving; Lukas was left alone with his obviously angry captain, who pushed him all the way back to the lockerroom ( ... )

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