commentary: This tired world could change

Jan 24, 2012 23:53

Commentary for This tired world could change as requested by missymeggins. Originally posted here.

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missymeggins January 25 2012, 08:57:03 UTC
Um, firstly:

and that involves a rooftop bar in Williamsburg in the early fall and city views as the sun goes down while they trade stories from their pasts. All this after they spend the day seeing all the sites that New Yorkers never take the time to see because we live here, which is secretly something she used to do with her mother, although she's not ready to tell him just yet.

I very very very much need this to happen. No pressure, I'm cool with you taking your time but at some point? I needto read this fic. <3

I really do like these last lines, but more importantly, I wanted to kind of go light on what the case actually is. The specifics don't matter, just the way he reacts to it.
I love that. Because you're absolutely right, the specifics don't matter and there's something so lovely about the idea that he doesn't think about it poetically or dramatically the way he normally would, turning it into a story in his head, because this time the reality is hitting him harder than normal and he just can't.

DIALOGUE IS HARD, ( ... )

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lormats January 27 2012, 03:50:39 UTC
first the first, GRAAAAAAAAAAAAAACE!!! word! your wrote a Castle fic! and is so beautfully written and so spot on, and the voices, and the characters, and your comments. Ok srsly, no only the fic is so good, but your comments, ♥ really spot on, and your favourite line works so good, and it's mine too.

Also 'Or basically, this is the two of them in a nutshell. They do not give up, even when everyone else has.' THIS so much.

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