An Introduction

[forceworks]

Greetings, welcome, and salutation

Comments

[adpaz]

What a wonderful poem. It's so descriptive. I love it. I look forward to reading more of your entries!

[forceworks]

Thank you!

[rosepurr]

I love the line, "I am Wild Progeny"!

[forceworks]

That took me a while to come up with, I'm still looking for a better term than Brethren of Balance or Brother of Balance.

[rm]

I am secretly hoping you do the entire competition in verse!

[forceworks]

I am seriously considering it. Though I exclude my comments from that.

[anchasta]

I'd be interested to see that as it is something I considered myself! ;D Nice poem.

[forceworks]

Thank you. I wrote that in the 10 minutes before I bolted out the door for work. When the muse is on, it is ON. :)

[spydielives]

*applause*

Excellent!!

[forceworks]

*bows* thank you

[walkertxkitty]

Beautifully descriptive poem. I've not often seen someone tell so much about themselves in only a few phrases. It's wonderfully paced, rhythmic, and wild. The patterns of the words themselves end up telling me almost as much about you as the words you chose. I look forward to seeing more.

[forceworks]

I've always been very big on the idea that the method of delivery of words can mean more than the words themselves.