The Truth or Something In-Between (Veronica Mars)

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Title: The Truth or Something In-Between
Rating: R
Summary: Veronica Mars. A fic based on prompts. (See end of fic for prompts.) Weevil, Logan and Veronica. Duncan and Kendall mentions.
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything etc.

Notes: Many thanks to the wonderful avoidingnemo for not only giving me the prompts, but for also looking over this fic and being

Comments

[luckycookie]

“Thanks for the ride.”

She forces a smile, but she won’t look at him.

Nothing is ever resolved.

He’ll bring that up the next time they fight -the next time they hurt each other. He knows it’s inevitable.

I really like that as an ending. Her refusal to look at him seems right- she's too overwhelmed. And he knows that he'll have another opportunity to say what he wants to say and that the cycle of hurt will probably continue. Nice read.

[foreign_element]

Thank you so much. :)

[jdrr22]

I like the discussion about Jensen Ackles...thankfully, you didn't use the other guy from Supernatural (and yes, I know his name...I just don't like him much).

[foreign_element]

Heh. Thanks!

[joobie_vienna]

And dude, Duncan has really bad form.

What a guy thing to say. Hee.

This is not Veronica. This is her anger and pain.

I really like that line and how you recognize that Logan wants her to be with him for the right reasons.

And, of course, all the silly, "I told you we needed to be more discreet," Logan and Weevil-ness. Fun!

[foreign_element]

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this fic. ;)

[flipped_pancake]

i'll admit it - JENSEN ACKLES IS HOTTER THAN JASON DOHRING. i am ashamed and strangely satisfied.

“Is your hair lighter?”

i like this line because it is TOTAL logan and yet at the same time.... I WILL PUT HIGHLIGHTS IN MY HAIR JUST TO GET LOGAN IN MY PANTS. i'm not ashamed to admit it.

Her eyes go wide, her pupils still dilated with lust. They’re so fucking blue that it hurts. He thinks he sees the beginning of tears. It’s a beautiful contrast to her flushed and glowing skin. Her mouth is red and ravaged, and fuck him, because he wants to kiss her until both their lips are raw and chapped. And she shouldn’t make him feel this way anymore.

i like this passage because it describes the LoVe relationship as it is currently. there is still that underlining tension and goddamn he is obviously still in love with her and she can't help but look at him first whenever she enters a room before her eyes slide to duncan obediently and it's sad and broken and totally them.

[foreign_element]

Yes, I think you're right. There is still a lot of unresolved feelings between Veronica and Logan. We'll just have to wait and see how it all plays out. Thank you so much.

[skk670]

“I told you we need to be more discreet, honey,” Logan says, fluttering his eyelashes.
Weevil rolls his eyes.

*Sigh* After reading this and watching “An Echolls Family Christmas” I remember how much I miss Logan and Weevil as my OTP.

[foreign_element]

Heh. Yes, and did you notice they were "in the closet." ;) Thanks!