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Nov 24, 2008 10:19

“if you can find a way to write the poem where you are not merely defending or justifying yourself but “get all the parts of” what torments you down-pursue its lineaments till you have reached what seems its core, and can make its ‘core visible’-in short, you can make a work of art that ‘stands on its own feet’ and isn’t still partly stuck in you, ( Read more... )

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fill_the_air November 25 2008, 02:14:54 UTC
you should start reading little bits of that rilke book i gave you.

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foreignphone November 25 2008, 03:45:03 UTC
i will once school is over. all i'm gonna do once school is over is read and work. read read read. i miss reading for me.

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i wrote this poem today, and i know its dumb but its about milk. a_life_of_love November 25 2008, 03:41:21 UTC

Newark, New Jersey
Is a place I have only seen from windows
Of planes
Or airports
While I write
A to-do list
And life as I knew it
Before
Starts again
Returning home,
I know I must go
To the grocery store
Because my milk has probably gone bad

listen, you just gotta write shit down and then it sounds horrible but pick it up a few days later and make it a poem. poems are easy. knowing what you want to write about is the hard part.

i hope you got my birthday text, i should have called. i am working 35 hours this week before wednesday. omg.

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Re: i wrote this poem today, and i know its dumb but its about milk. foreignphone November 25 2008, 03:48:49 UTC
omg, i love the newark, new jersey mayor.

i don't really want to write poems. i mean, i kinda do, but mostly i just want to understand them and be able to write papers on them and not get Cs or Ds because my professor can tell how much i hate poetry.

i did get the text, and thank you. we are both bad remembering friends.

man, fuck working all the time. especially since before i got hired i told them all i wanted to do was be a baker and so they have me as a sandwich prep and then 2 1/2 weeks later they fire a baker and hire a new one.

let's go somewhere! i miss the mountains. let's have a mountain trip for spring break 09.

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Re: i wrote this poem today, and i know its dumb but its about milk. _cranes November 25 2008, 03:56:33 UTC
if you are craving a mountain trip, you could stay with me. like we've been saying for ages, except really.

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Re: i wrote this poem today, and i know its dumb but its about milk. a_life_of_love November 26 2008, 04:36:32 UTC
i misss youuuuuuuu

listen i cant write about poetry either, its so hard. sometimes they dont mean anythingggg

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