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Jul 02, 2007 22:24

So I went out barefoot ( Read more... )

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flyingshaman July 3 2007, 13:15:21 UTC
beautiful image in the third stanza

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forestwhisperer July 5 2007, 00:37:03 UTC
thank you
^_^

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autumnsea July 4 2007, 07:33:09 UTC
There's music in this piece. From the images and the soul of it.

My favourite stanzas are:

come winging
straight out
of a wild ray of light
that fell through the storm
like a chorus.

He listened
to my heart,
head cocked
to the setting sun,
and all his reply
was held
in the elegant form
of his cobalt
silhouette.

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forestwhisperer July 5 2007, 00:37:28 UTC
what a lovely compliment. thank you.

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greenseer July 4 2007, 12:33:11 UTC
You words are so welcome
after your long hiatus!

Post soon, I promise.

Ah, the poetry that flows in summer..

Love & Peace!

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forestwhisperer July 5 2007, 00:40:46 UTC
And I have been planning to write you. I've been working long days (11 or 12 hours for 8 days in a row is our schedule), so my energy for anything else has been lacking.

If the China Buffet grease meal doesn't kill me, I'll write something tonight. I wish I was watching you spin fire rather than patriotic explosions tonight. ^_^

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greenseer July 6 2007, 22:52:08 UTC

I sent out a letter today-
belated post, but never the less green scented and potent.

Life has been unbelievably tidal and wild lately-
every time I think I have a pause to sit and document my goings on to send you,
the tides shift again and AH! more action!
I may just wait a bit longer and distill it in verse.
Perhaps thats the new path of my poetry,
not focused on the bones of the past,
but the quivering breath of now.

So much love from the Green Mountains-
milkweed flower blessings & monarch dreams

- A.

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