the hawk and the jay

Jul 17, 2007 21:11

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zhenzhi July 18 2007, 06:21:09 UTC
your poems are really good.
i love this one. :-)

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greenseer July 18 2007, 14:10:31 UTC
Lately it has been the superiority contests
of the ravens and the crows,
the jays occasionally intervening with their own idea of justice
and rank.

It amazes me that such comparatively small birds
can be such adept and vicious fliers and not be of the kestrel family.
My grandmother loved to tell me of my grandfather's misfortune with blue jays-
he'd mow the lawn and they would come swooping down,
screaming as if hell has loosed them,
and he would dash inside and they would attack the screen for nearly an hour.
Crazy! And according to her, he never touched their nests.
So who knows what their argument was!

Your writing is lovely, as always-
and much missed.

Peace!

PS: The snails are dancing in my corner of the world as well! :)

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ATM commenting anonymous September 16 2007, 13:36:23 UTC
what an enjoyable poem to say, cool and easy for the appreciator.

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