"Hopeless" Chapter 2

Oct 07, 2006 21:43

Chapter 2: Forces Of Nature ( Read more... )

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avoisiner October 12 2006, 17:43:24 UTC
I finally got to read this! I think it's a bit difficult to get into the story, seeing as alot of it is things that gives much meaning for/to you,and that for the rest of us is kind of random.

You're good at building characters, which makes me want to see them develop. Write more.

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