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[forever_nataku]

Pain was all he felt when he slipped back into consiousness. A throbbing ache, not quite anywhere in particular, but unquestionably evident. He tried to force his mind beyond the pain, and his thoughts became as basic and instictive as possible

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dont mind me... editing is fun

[princess_prozak]

Pain was all he felt when he slipped back into consciousness.

A throbbing ache consumed his entire body. As he tried to force his mind beyond the agony, his thought process was quickly diminishing to nothing more than basic instinct.

"Open... your... eyes.", he told himself. He searched for his muscles and felt for those controlling his eye lids, working them slowly open. Though unveiled, his eyes saw little more that a faint, orange light emanating from a corner of some unknown room. He regained, gradually, the control of his muscles from the crippling pain, mustering the strength to raise his arms to his face. Each hand, balled in a fist, clumsily managed to arrive at its corresponding eye socket and lend a gentle rub. Eventually, his arms retreated back to his sides, exhausted.

After what seemed like eternity, the pain began to subside.

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ok... that enough editing for now cause i'm going to bed, cutie. i've read the whole thing though. i liked it, it kept my attention despite your ruthless disregard for paragraphsi

[forever_nataku]

actually, blame livejournal. it was seperated into paragraphs in wordpad. hehe. AND, the part u turned into quotes isnt supposed to be quotes... when a character says something to himself its in italics, not quotations. LJ didnt give me that option... so this is just the botched Lj version, copied and pasted from the original. and yes... you are supposed to be kept in the dark. youll find out what happens to our mysterious main character... eventually.

italics

[princess_prozak]

italics are sweet

opps... my bad. i didn't know that/thought the character was actually saying it outloud. hehe... i'll have to show you how to get italics next time i come over. it's easy as pie.

~tina

p.s.

[forever_nataku]

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Re: p.s.

[princess_prozak]

ummm... what the hell?!? i guess you didn't copy the whole html script, dude! try again!!

~tina

Hm...

[anonymous]

Intersting thing ya got there.
So when ya starting up Umassd? Ya dorming? Know what classe you're taking?
-Doug C.

deloused

[some_bad_fish]

fuckin sweet :-D reminds me of the Deloused Storybook, u should read it.. gotta download it tho and its a .pdf but its madly fucked up and awesome, too bad i dont understand half of whats going on.. u can get it by going to www.goldstandardlabs.com then clicking on the bottom where it says "gold standard labs .com" then the little thing that says "download the deloused story book"

goood luck :-) thing is ud need the cd to listen to at the same time for the full deloused experience. its not the story on cd tho its like a soundtrack to the story, its by Mars Volta. called Deloused in the Comatorium

peace easy cheesy º<>