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foreverasmosher

Birthday Wishes - Part 2

Jan 30, 2012 22:01

Title: Birthday Wishes
Pairings: Ian/Anthony. Tiny bit of Anthony/Kalel
Rating/Warnings: PG-13, Fluff
Summary: It's Ian's birthday, and he has a special request
Author's Notes: People liked my first chapter??? Say what now??? I'm glad. :)
Previous Chapters: http://foreverasmosher.livejournal.com/748.html

*This is kind of a pointless/has a point but is ( Read more... )

fluff, pg-13, smosh

Comments 16

ext_970856 January 31 2012, 05:33:19 UTC

anthony wasnt rambling and this is NOT a useless chapter AT ALL i loved it espically when they both told there feelins for each other u r great with writing emotions I NEED MOAR NOOOWWW or i'll die XD

foreverasmosher January 31 2012, 05:59:29 UTC

Really?? I kind of felt like it was moving too quickly. Thank you do much! (and just as a secret, I'm working on chapter three relight now!)

foreverasmosher January 31 2012, 05:59:47 UTC

*right. Dumb phone.

destiel09 January 31 2012, 16:08:28 UTC

Hahaha, what kind of Ian is bored will they film? XD Anyway, I pretty much love Kalel. Ok, she's pretty stupid and no one in the world would react like that, but she's funny :P I love it and I wanna the next part!

foreverasmosher January 31 2012, 20:33:51 UTC

See I don't mind Kalel, that's why I make her seem as though she's not a horrible bitch. :)

foreverasmosher January 31 2012, 20:34:10 UTC

And you shall have the next part soon ;)

9800andseagulls January 31 2012, 16:55:39 UTC

This wasn't pointless omg! It was AMAZING! MORE MORE MOAR MOAR MOARRR!!!!

I seriously love it! I can't wait for the next installment! :D

foreverasmosher January 31 2012, 20:35:05 UTC

Really? I'm glad. I find it pointless and just a whole bunch of rambling. I also thought it was moving far too fast for my liking. But thank you!

mcmm1 January 31 2012, 20:35:13 UTC

*slow claps* this was awesome !!! i love how Kalel doesnt get mad she's actually happy for Anthony :)

foreverasmosher January 31 2012, 20:36:40 UTC

Thank you!! I don't think Kalel is that bad, so I chose to not to portray her as an evil bitch, and I just wanted an original idea for her. In glad you liked it!

mercurial_fan January 31 2012, 21:20:40 UTC

whoo the link works! I loved kalel's reaction. I dont think i could be that forgiving :p

foreverasmosher January 31 2012, 22:16:14 UTC

Everyone is saying that! I didn't want her to be a total bitch like you see in every other fic. I wanted her to be different, and it's the way I'd see it happening if it were true. :)