New Pros fic - Whip in my valise

May 26, 2012 19:45

Just a little fic.  It's been aaages since I posted a Pros fic!

Whip in my valise )

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liriel1810 May 26 2012, 23:13:49 UTC
It's always nice to get an outside person's view of the Bodie/Doyle dynamic. It's also really good to see what they miss - that Bodie and Doyle are two halves of one whole. Doyle vents externally, while Bodie keeps it all inside and at the end of the day, they need each other to reach equilibrium.

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foreverfoxcat May 27 2012, 06:41:01 UTC
Thank you. They are such a team, aren't they - their personalities complement each other so well. I'm glad you liked it, thanks. :D

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lillianorchid May 27 2012, 00:50:41 UTC
I really enjoyed reading this, It's great to get the other Agents POVs on Bodie & Doyle and how they are with each other. :D

Thanks for sharing it with us. :D

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foreverfoxcat May 27 2012, 06:42:29 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I often wonder what the other agents think of our lads and the banter and the dynamics between them so it was definitely fun to write. :D

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roven75 May 27 2012, 13:23:27 UTC
What a cleverly set up little story, and it's very enjoyable to read them through the other agents' eyes! It's nice to read something you've written, once again :)

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foreverfoxcat May 27 2012, 16:15:58 UTC
Aw, thank you ever so much. I didn't realise how long it's been since I posted a pros story, I definitely need to get back into the swing of pros fic. I'm really glad you liked it, thanks. :D

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bodiecuddle May 27 2012, 14:52:33 UTC
What a story. I loved it. So Bodie and Doyle. thanks!!!

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foreverfoxcat May 27 2012, 16:16:40 UTC
Aw, bless you, thank you ever so much. I'm so glad you liked it, and that you felt it was properly Bodie-and-Doyle-ish. :D

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shooting2kill May 28 2012, 20:37:28 UTC
I haven't had a chance to read this yet as I've been without internet access for a couple of days but I just wanted to say how pleased I am to see new writing from you as I love your stories and I look forward to catching up and reading it!

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foreverfoxcat May 28 2012, 21:25:53 UTC
Oh, that's such a lovely comment, thank you. I'm really pleased that you've liked my stories so far, it's definitely encouraging because I know I've been out of the loop with my Pros fic and I desperately want to get my writing mojo back. I really hope you like this one when you read it. :D

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shooting2kill May 28 2012, 21:30:42 UTC
I think I might have said this before but the story which really stands out in my mind is the one where they're playing football with some kids (Doyle I think?) on a London council estate and I thought you captured the atmosphere of London perfectly. So, to cut a long story short, I hope you stay in the loop for a while and carry on writing Pros!

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foreverfoxcat May 30 2012, 20:18:56 UTC
Oh shush now, you're making me blush!

No, don't stop...

:D

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