Changing Tides Chapter 5

[foreversin]

Changing Tides  Chapter 5 is finally here took a while and I hope you all enjoy it and all that fun stuff. I'm lazy atm and don't feel like posting all the links to the first chapters since I am in at schoo/college/uni or what ever you feel like refering to the evil things as.

Changing Tides

Chapter 5: Chasing Ghosts Part 1

Aikido walked from the

Comments

[allyoucaneater]

myuuu... it's weird that at first there's no spelling problem and stuff... but around the middle, they started... methinks you need a beta... the usage of thru for through is kinda amusing because people rarely use that nao... but since it's your fic, you can do anything you like 8D

I like the fighting scene and other things btw :D The old Iruka memory scene is good TwT

[foreversin]

Heh didn't notice i'll have to print out another copy and go over it again. I will admit I got lazy with the copy i printed out and started not seeing things anymore. Glad you liked it. Was it worth the wait?

[allyoucaneater]

It was worth it :D

*rereads again*

[foreversin]

**chuckles** Have fun reading it again hopefully that will hold you over till part 2 comes out. No action scenes but I will say. . . hmm It feature alot more ghosts.