Changing Tides Chapter 1 Revised

[foreversin]

This chapter was somewhat painful to revise( damn you kakashi's scene damn you)

Changing Tides : Prologue

Comments

[allyoucaneater]

You should post the edited chapters at Fanfiction.net :D
I linger there moar and it's easier to think up reviews there :)

I love the ways you edited some bits here and there. The last line amused me :)

[foreversin]

FF.net will get edited versions I also have to make note to include a disclaimer at the begining of chapter 5 part 2 to remind people hey some of these things changed.

C'mon you know that is so a Tsunade line anything for that drink. I need to work on chapter 2 tonigh then I will proably update the other ones on FF.net

Only 6 more days till chapter 5 part 2 will be posted exicted?

[allyoucaneater]

excited!? I'm jumping up and down with glee!!! 8DDD