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Fic--Ashes Part Two

Jul 13, 2013 17:27

Last part for now. Thanks for reading!
Title: Ashes Part Two

Author: foreverwriting9

Characters/Pairings: Castle/Beckett

Spoilers: For Watershed

Rating: G

Word Count: 2,435

Summary: All she can think as she stands there, hundreds of miles from everything she loves, is that this man has no idea what she’s given up.

( A mystery tangled between them and puzzle pieces sliding together and everything diamond bright and impossibly simple. )

fic, castle/beckett, tv: castle

Comments 8

makeyourstand July 14 2013, 02:36:15 UTC

This is really wonderful. The tension and sadness on both of their parts comes across very clearly; you can feel it. Really, really good job with this part. Keep up the amazing work.

foreverwriting9 July 14 2013, 19:06:21 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked it.

namarie24 July 14 2013, 07:00:17 UTC

This is lovely and angsty, and it's so easy to visualize every scene. Well done.

foreverwriting9 July 14 2013, 19:10:02 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

verogeller July 14 2013, 20:01:56 UTC

Great work, loved the first part and this chapter was just as good (and angsty). Keep up the good work ;)

foreverwriting9 July 14 2013, 20:17:05 UTC

Thanks so much!

fangfaceandrea July 16 2013, 01:24:16 UTC

such a sad fic, you can feel the longing and hurt on both parts. Great work!

foreverwriting9 July 16 2013, 11:27:08 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.