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Jan 17, 2004 23:29

Title, Innocence Lost (chapter 13 ( Read more... )

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x_dorkified January 18 2004, 07:33:23 UTC
Oh Benji has to tell Tony. garh, but he can't talk. Okay, well if I was in your position, I wouldn't end it and add a sequel because this story is just too good to end!

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foreveryours311 January 18 2004, 08:13:18 UTC
I love it too much to let it end!!! which is why if i HAD to end it i would end up with a sequal.... I baby this fac WAY to much...glad you enjoyed...who says tony will believe benji....or benji will have the courage to tell on joel...or who says joel wont get to benji first... Wow i just gave myself ideas Must go work bye byes
Love hugs peace
stace

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mestupgcfreek62 January 18 2004, 08:13:11 UTC
dude, your not gonna send benji away are you? if anyone should be sent away it should be joel! hes a bad bad boy. you have to have tony find out soon one way or another! please update soon! and i like stories that have sequals(i dont know why) so i'd choose for a sequal.

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foreveryours311 January 18 2004, 08:20:28 UTC
as for sending benji away...Maybe, Maybe not. Not really sure yet, i think i know whats going on but it always seems to change when i start typing. My belif is that this story has a life of its own and just uses me as a means to type, because i usually have no idea whats going to happen next... i like sequal stories too, but then i would have to take a break from writing, and my emotional attachment to this fic has gone way beyond normal, probaly beyond healthy too.. well thanks for reviewing.. and for liking
Much love
stace

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mestupgcfreek62 January 18 2004, 08:28:27 UTC
your welcome! please dont do anything crazy with benji, thats all im saying. if you have to send him away ok, but dont let joel try to kill him again!!!!! anyway, the story's using you? thats not nice, you should get paid for being used then. anyway, i gotta go now. bye bye!

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dum_dum_pops January 18 2004, 16:52:56 UTC
why didn't billy say anything!? he going to say something about what he realized, isn't it?
this is amazing. you're an incredibly writer :)

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foreveryours311 January 18 2004, 16:59:04 UTC
You have just made me smile and i mean that... i just needed to focus on Benji and Tony for a lil while we'll see where Billy goes soon enough...i think...
Much love
stace

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deathbyspork13 January 18 2004, 17:03:45 UTC
wonderful, mah dear, wonderful. i love this story. please do drag it on. :) long stories make me happy. more soon? eh? :) <3

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foreveryours311 January 18 2004, 18:11:23 UTC
how come i feel like i know you?... Well glad you like yes more soon... which is why i must go write... bye byes hun
Much love
stace

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deathbyspork13 January 18 2004, 18:32:49 UTC
hehe. i don't know why you feel like you know me. unless...*shifty eyes* nah. :)

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foreveryours311 January 18 2004, 20:02:50 UTC
Oh my god that was you!!
heehee just kidding...

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im__a__dreamer January 18 2004, 17:28:53 UTC
why isnt this longer! meh its really good though, try to update soon, i was waiting for that

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foreveryours311 January 18 2004, 18:13:35 UTC
I agree it is a bit too short but the next chapter kinda switchs sences, 13 and 14 are kinda going to be more like one chapter split in half..dont worry next one soon i promise... Much love

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