I wanna be your slave

[foreveryours311]

Title: Dark angel
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Benji and Joel
Warnings: Kink, S&M, Rough sex... what ever you want to call it
Summary: His hair was spiked into a perfect mohawk, eyes lined in coal black pencil, the collar standing out against his porcelain skin, clad in nothing but the collar and a pair of black pants. He looked like an angel, a dark

Comments

[dragons_shadow]

I am a bondage freak, and that was by far one of the greatest twincest-bondage stories I have read yet. I also have a fetish about Dark Angels - I'm getting black wings tattooed on my back and a fallen angel on my hip (my own designs).

Benji was almost surprised his angel didn’t bleed black. He whispered to himself, "So pretty, so perfect, my dark angel, time to clip his wings, he cant fly away…bleed black,-cry blood."

That was... Wow.
I think I love you.

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[foreveryours311]

Awww glad to be loved. *cough*i love your icon*Cough* The world needs more bondage fics i dont know why but it does. the angel wings on your back are going to be cool. Like davey havoks? Yeah this review made me feel loved glad you liked the fic...

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[dragons_shadow]

no, they're spikey wings. I'mma add you to my friends, lol.
And thank you, I like my icon too, lol. Love yours - love NBC.

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[foreveryours311]

Awww thank you I'll add you back...NBC is godly...

[corrodedheart]

seriously, i thought when benji started smoking the cigarette, that he was going to make cigarette burns in Joel's skin...maybe that's foreshadowing for your next part?? lol. I was definitely looking for some bondage...and that was so well fucking written it's not even funny. Ah! This seriously beat my safety pin story out of the water....wow....I think I love you 2345657676553234 over. Heh.

But, I don't want to be nitpicking or anything....when Benji was speaking, he had a few run on sentences going on there. But otherwise, your descriptive language, spelling, everything was awesome.

GREAT JOB, DUDE!!!!!!! lots of crazy hugs from the kelleh...((elise I love you))...

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[joelymoely]

*runs up behind the Kelleh and latches on to her leg*

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[foreveryours311]

this is in the book of my favorite reviews, not sure why but it made me smile. glad you liked the fic... with the cigarette burns i was going to do that and then decided to hold it for later... thanks for all the love.

Yeah i know benji had some run on's but it was more for characters sake, you know the muttering under his breath, and saying things that werent even complete sentences sometimes... thank for point that out though. Again glad you liked... *gets huged a lot*

[_noisenkisses_]

Wow I liked this. I'm not usually into S&M but this was hot... I don't usually find Joel sexy but just that image of the pale skin with the dark hair and dark eyes... shit... that's like my new fantasy *realises she's babbling*
Basically I really enjoyed this, it was written *so* well and I love the way Benji and Joel were portrayed, in some sick way it was almost realistic? I just... really loved this. It's definitely one of my favourite twincests.

[anonymous]

scary.

hawt

[ex_fuck_your920]

that was hot REALLY hot and u need to add more much much more!!!