Comments | foreveryours311: holy shit i did it again!

foreveryours311

holy shit i did it again!

Apr 07, 2004 17:39

Title: Watching over me
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Benji and Joel…
Genre: Psycho Joel (ha I do that to often)
Summary: At first I was ok with it. We had been giving each other little kisses on the cheek for years, since we were kids, most people thought it was cute “oh look at the twins kiss… they’re so cute,” but what’s cute for 6 year olds is ( Read more... )

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livindagclife April 8 2004, 07:31:43 UTC

Ohhhh...wow.....ohhh -blinks- amazing

maddenluvlovato April 8 2004, 07:38:47 UTC

awwww... That was wonderful I LOVED it! I loved your Lost innocence story as well what happened to that? Can you please continue PLEASE!

abercrombizombi April 9 2004, 04:10:39 UTC

phsyco!Joel scares the shit out of me... for reals. wait.. its benji okay with all this at the end? i mean.. there not normal, they can't be but like... does he hate joel now? ... im not really sure where his frame of mind is at the end, problably because im a moron....

anyway, i loved it :D

foreveryours311 April 9 2004, 15:11:57 UTC

its more that benji doesnt know how to get over it, like he never had to get over things without joel, so hes trapped the person that always saves him, is the person that hurt him, hes confused and has no where to turn except back to joel who was there for him throughout his life. i didnt make it that clear, but thats my opinion on it, it can really be taken how ever the reader wants it to. and you're not a moron *hugs*. glad you liked it

_noisenkisses_ April 9 2004, 08:38:02 UTC

I have reaaally gone off twincest but because it was written by you I read it anyway and it was pretty cool. i don't tend to like rape between the twins because it just seems wrong but this was done well. Good job!

foreveryours311 April 9 2004, 15:09:46 UTC

i have gone of twincest too, i just kinda wrote it for the sake of finishing some old crap on my computer. its not something i am especially proud of, but i got it done. i have kinda been MIA in writing so i am running to try to finish random things i have started. Still made me happy that you thought it was good though, you always can make me smile

unspiritual_me April 9 2004, 14:35:19 UTC

Wow. I really liked it, even thought it's not the type of stuff I usually read. It was good. Psycho Joel, he was kind of scary! Poor Benj.