The Cocaine Chronicles

Aug 18, 2004 19:00

Title- “Benji was a good brother”
Author- ForeverYours311
Rating- Pg-13 to R
Pairings- Joel/Tony (GC/Mest), Joel/Benji (GC/GC)
Summary- But Benji was a good brother, and he would help Joel to the bathroom and turn on the water in the shower with a only a slight sigh of ‘what the fuck are you on?’ when he would see the clock glowing 3am, and Joel ( Read more... )

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bleed_me_blind August 19 2004, 02:41:49 UTC
wow, that was great. but for soem reason, the ending makes me want more. hmm....well it was great. i loved it. and i got a little tear reading it :)

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anchoredboyy August 19 2004, 02:47:06 UTC
this was amazing. seriously, it's really really good. i REALLY liked the beginning and the end.

"with only a slight sigh of ‘what the fuck are you on?'"

i liked that. and at the end, after sticking up for him a million times, all Benj had to do was ask and Joel told him.

excellent writing.

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foreveryours311 August 19 2004, 12:53:03 UTC
That you, for some reason i always take your comments to heart and that one definatly made me happy. I liked the whole idea of benji never seriosly asking, but all he really had to do was ask and joel would have told the whole time... Thanks a lot,and i am glad you liked it.

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anchoredboyy August 19 2004, 21:53:32 UTC
that's exactly what i thought. awesome :)

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yet2comeundone August 19 2004, 02:53:48 UTC
wow. that was some seriously talented writing. a lot of times the drug stories come off fake, like they don't know how it goes, but this was really good. Well done. I'll re-read it again I think.

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foreveryours311 August 19 2004, 12:56:18 UTC
Personaly i agree with you about drug stories, which is why i tried hard to not have this one turn out all, over done? i guess, i am not quite sure of the correct word to use. thanks a lot of the writing complments, very glad you liked it.

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ilikesharpies August 19 2004, 03:37:34 UTC
0mgz x5.

I liked that a fucking lot.

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kaomichan August 19 2004, 05:06:12 UTC
wow. that was fucking great! <333 :D i loved that! it was woah amazing/wonderful! :D it was really sad and sorta sweet (the way benji was "a good brother") and just really well-written.

i'm gunna read the second one now.

<333

i totally love the way you write ;D it's wonderful, you are so talented! :D (i know i've read some other fic of yours and loved it because i know your icon :P)

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foreveryours311 August 19 2004, 12:58:48 UTC
Aww, fucking great? i havent gotten that one a while, then again i havent writen in a while. i wanted people to see benji as the sweet careing one, even if he was unable to admit to himself that joel just might have a problem, if that makes sense. Thanks a lot. and i am faltered to hear you like my writing.

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kaomichan August 20 2004, 10:53:34 UTC
yeah fucking great! <3 u did portray Benji that way! :D yeah it made sense :D

no problem ;) i hope to read more of your fics :D

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