Yours, Forever & Always. Part One

May 02, 2008 21:48


Title: Yours, Forever & Always
Author: forgivemealways
Length: 1/2
Genre: Romance
Pairings: Hosu, Yoosu.... squint for Jaeho
Ratings: PG
Summary: When he's gone...you finally realize your heart was beating for him all along
Beta'd by: my lovely jie jie <33
 Author's Notes IMPORTANT...MUST READ
Junsu's thoughts are in italics
Yunho's thoughts are bolded
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andersenmom May 4 2008, 00:42:45 UTC
Hm. Interesting. I can't wait to see how it ends.

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forgivemealways May 4 2008, 01:02:10 UTC
thanks for commenting!

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realitywaiting May 4 2008, 00:43:28 UTC
becuase your a jerk who doesn't realize how good you have it until it's too late....heh heh sry it just came out i couldn't resist answering. goodness, i really can hardly wait to find out what's going on! I hope he looks for junsu, like really looks for, search team! the WORKS! I really do think they need to be together. I think jaejoong would be happy knowing the two poeple he loves most are taking care of each other in his absence. I think he'd be majorly displeased with how yunho treats his baby brother! I really do like this!

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forgivemealways May 4 2008, 01:07:23 UTC
"because you're a jerk who doesn't realize how good you have it until it's too late" that is so true! I'm so glad you're pumped for the next part...haha you are pumped right? I think the HOSU deserve to be together because they've been through so much but I do tend to have a soft spot for Yoosu because deep down I'm a hardcore Yoosu fangirl...I'm so happy you always stick around for my stories ♥! You and others that usually comment on my stories give me so much motivation to write! Admit it you're secretly one of my fans huh... LOL jk

Anyways do you have msn? I would love to chat with more people from LJ who have access to msn!

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realitywaiting May 4 2008, 01:35:57 UTC
Hee hee! and yes yes, i have msn i PM'd the adress to you!

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spazzncute May 4 2008, 00:47:53 UTC
OMG! I loved it! It was wonderfully written, but why his Junsu Mrs instead of Mr? I mean even though their married, shouldn't the term still be husband because Su is male? But anywho, you're the author and its your choice to write the story in whatever way you want to write it! Please update it soon! Thank you!

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forgivemealways May 4 2008, 01:08:48 UTC
Thanks for the comment! Well in my head I thought it would be cute if Junsu was called Mrs.Jung because I'm just weird like that...hopefully it won't offend you or others.

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spazzncute May 4 2008, 02:52:24 UTC
u didnt offend, i was just alittle confused about it

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sheilapiglet May 4 2008, 00:50:38 UTC
good job..i really like how you portrayed Hosu here...I hope that they end up together...I'm more of a jaeho fan, but since JJ is gone, I'm rooting for Hosu all the way=)

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forgivemealways May 4 2008, 01:11:37 UTC
Thanks for commenting! Hopefully all the jaejooong fans won't kill me for his character death =(! Thanks so much for reading even though you're a jaeho shipper =))

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forgivemealways May 4 2008, 01:14:39 UTC
you love me *blushes*... I don't think my boyfriend would take that too well haha jk I don't have a boyfriend sighh. Thanks so much for your awesome comment *embarrassed*, haha the words you used to describe my fic makes me feel so happy yet so shy because I feel that my fic is nowhere near as good as a ton of other fics I've read around these communities ♥

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forgivemealways May 4 2008, 06:46:52 UTC
ooh okayy I will definitely check out your community! Is it open to all pairings?

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