Yours, Forever & Always. Part One

May 02, 2008 21:48


Title: Yours, Forever & Always
Author: forgivemealways
Length: 1/2
Genre: Romance
Pairings: Hosu, Yoosu.... squint for Jaeho
Ratings: PG
Summary: When he's gone...you finally realize your heart was beating for him all along
Beta'd by: my lovely jie jie <33
 Author's Notes IMPORTANT...MUST READ
Junsu's thoughts are in italics
Yunho's thoughts are bolded
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coke_pie221 May 4 2008, 04:59:13 UTC
Wahh~ poor Hosu~ *wipes tears*
Yunho why couldn't you say you love him!?!?
rawr..
oh.. and Poor Yoochun. he's always there for Su~
i would hope that Su would end up with Chunnie but i don't think thats going to happen T-T (srry... obsessed Yoosu lover)

I wonder how Su would be like once he finds out he's pregnant..
can't wait for moree~

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forgivemealways May 4 2008, 06:28:27 UTC
Hey! Firstly thank you so much for commenting! It is really hard for Yunho to tell Junsu that he loves Junsu because Yunho thinks that since his first love is Jae, he shouldn't betray Jae. Also Yunho thinks that no words are needed for Junsu to understand how much he means to Yunho. But because we as humans are isecure, we actually need to hear things like I love you to understand how important we are. So since Junsu never heard Yunho tell him that Yunho loves him, Junsu will always feel that he is only a replacement for Jaejoong and nothing more.

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chicmez May 4 2008, 06:10:49 UTC
aw....... so sad!!!!!!!
poor JunSu and YunHo!!!
but they are so sweet together... sigh
YooChun is sweet as well... but I can't imagine him with JunSu in this fic actually... which is pretty bad... lolz
I think they might be better as friends... is that bad???

YAY for HoSU!!!!!

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forgivemealways May 4 2008, 17:14:37 UTC
Thank you so much for taking your time to read and comment! It's not bad that you think Yoosu won't end up together...everyone is entitled to their own opinions. Yoosu in this story are very good friends so no matter what happens yoochun will always be there for junsu...and hosu are quite lovely together except yunho was stupid enough to let junsu go.
Thank you for commenting!

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newbie_tortoise May 4 2008, 06:45:04 UTC
ah... honestly i don like male preg... nothing to do with you though...

the story is quite nice... i like the part where both yunho and junsu were thinking about each other...

i like yoochun's character too.. though i don foresee a yoosu ending... T.T

keep it up!!! ^_^

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forgivemealways May 4 2008, 17:25:08 UTC
I'm sorry I should've put a disclaimer or a warning indicating that it was a mpreg fiction but I didn't feel that there was a need to because there were very limited scenes about Junsu being pregnant. Very sorry about that! Actually the part of hosu thinking about each other I think I might've taken it off a drama.. you know how typical asian dramas are...but I cried writing that part though because I kept thinking of scenes in a drama well actually this story was like a movie in my head. Yoochun's character is very very nice, in a way he may be too idealistic but this is all fiction so it works out fine
Thanks for reading and commenting!

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baboboy May 4 2008, 06:46:25 UTC
OMG THIS IS SO GOOD!!!!

Yunho was a jerk but even jerks deserve s 2nd chance and now that they´re going to have a baby they need to be together but damn, Yunho just tell him that you love him! xD

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forgivemealways May 4 2008, 17:29:31 UTC
*Blushes* You give me too much credit! I don't think all jerks deserve a second chance but if Yunho proves to Junsu that he is sincere then I definitely agree that he deserves a second chance. Junsu definitely needs to hear Yunho tell him that he loves him because Junsu is such a insecure person in this fic.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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wintersplash May 4 2008, 11:16:41 UTC
waaah!!!i love this a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please continue!!!!!!i will be looking forward to part 2 okie dokie?!?!

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forgivemealways May 4 2008, 17:31:19 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! The second part will be up...when I can gather enough motivation to write.

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