The Za Lord is displeased.

Apr 20, 2010 09:32

1: Orihime was going mad. Absolutely mad and this time she felt it. Cracks in the walls, the sky, everything and she could hear them, speaking and muttering when there was only her to listen. At night it was worse. She swore she could hear shouting, screams and a voice; a single man’s voice sometimes whispering, sometimes shouting, but there. If ( Read more... )

fic:doctorwho, rage, fic:bleach

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denshi_no_ultra April 20 2010, 00:28:57 UTC
Ooooh, fic! \o/\o/\o/

Orihime as the Doctor's companion, cool!

I liked the fic, it was really dynamic, all the running and getting chased by big stompy things was so Doctor Who :)

And I like how Orihime just takes things as they come, her behaviour is very much like in canon, she is really in character. And I lold at her saying 'You live in my wall.' That was such an Orihime thing to say :D

I haven't seen any episodes with 11th Doctor, so I don't know how well he is written, but I'm sure it's pretty well :) Only, doesn't have a catchphrase of his own? I thought Nine was the one who said 'Fantastic'...

I'll be looking forward to the next part of the fic, I want to know why exactly was she hearing the Doctor's voice from the walls :D

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forgottenranger April 20 2010, 01:06:52 UTC
:D I blame late night watching of Doctor Who. Then starting the day listening to Doctorin' The Tardis by KLF and the Timelords. XD

Yey! I'm so glad. She might be a good companion for him and he'd definitely be good for her I think. She'd learn to stand more on her own feet with him. :D

I thought so, she's been through plenty of wacky things so it'd be no different. except fun. :P Oh good! I'm glad that run true.

11th seems to have Geronemo. But sometimes 10th hearkened back to 9th so it seemed to work. :P Or maybe not. Oh well.

Yey! I'll work away! :D Thank you for reading!

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denshi_no_ultra April 20 2010, 10:46:11 UTC
Lol, that's some weird source of inspiration :D

Yeah, that's a good point. She will not go 'Kurosaki-kun' all the time at least. She'll go 'Doctor-kun' maybe? :D

Yeah, she is kind of like Alice in Wonderland, she doesn't just say wtf, she participates in the events.

Geronimo would not really work in the fic, 'Fantastic' is better :D

Thank you for writing!

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forgottenranger April 20 2010, 11:19:11 UTC
All Doctor Who themed of course, but brilliant stuff. That song always makes me feel hyped and ready for anything.

Nope. Doctor-san. XD

Yes, exactly. This time she's in a situation where she can participate and do some good.

:D

^_^ My pleasure!

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mako_pretty April 20 2010, 01:51:30 UTC
That's pretty epic. *adds to memories*

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forgottenranger April 20 2010, 10:03:28 UTC
Thank you!

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