Yay, a prologue cover! Good things do come to those who wait :DD I like the feeling it conveys - it really looks like a dramatic last stand or something.
I can't really comment on how accurate the clothes are, but aren't those two dangly bits on the hair supposed to be longer? Not that I'm criticising or anything :)
Lol, and here I was thinking you're about ready with it :DD Ok then, I'll be waiting impatiently for the whole of it :D
Well, it's not like I know anything about art to give proper criticism... But if something occurs to me, I'll tell you. From what I can say by one picture, you're doing it right :D
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Yay, a prologue cover! Good things do come to those who wait :DD I like the feeling it conveys - it really looks like a dramatic last stand or something.
I can't really comment on how accurate the clothes are, but aren't those two dangly bits on the hair supposed to be longer? Not that I'm criticising or anything :)
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Heee. Im afraid I'll have to be changing the doujin's length. It's way too big for a first comic. Doesn't mean I'll be stopping. :D
Critique away! An artist requires comment and criticism to improve. :D
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Lol, and here I was thinking you're about ready with it :DD Ok then, I'll be waiting impatiently for the whole of it :D
Well, it's not like I know anything about art to give proper criticism... But if something occurs to me, I'll tell you. From what I can say by one picture, you're doing it right :D
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Heh sorry. The current plan is.... epic. Too big for a first time thing, so I'll be cutting them down into one shot episodes that are linked. :D
Hey anything is great. Just tell me if things look wrong or out of place or just not right and that's more than enough. :D
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