This is Not a Syndicate

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This is Not a Syndicate (PG13) AU Onew + Key | The pair set out on a quest to retrieve crates of soju from an abandoned storage warehouse in a very old car.

Comments

[perkybird]

LOL WAT JUST HAPPENED HAHAHAHAHAHA KIBUM IS SO GR8.

Jinki would've put more effort into vocalising his opinions, with lots of punctuated letters and wild hand gestures to demonstrate his acute displeasure, but driving the car was taking up the bulk of his concentration.

LMAOO I LOVE IMAGINING THIS SHIT BECAUSE JINKI IS TOTALLY THE TYPE TO MAKE URGENT FERAL GRUNTS/SOUNDS AND FLAIL AROUND BECAUSE HE IS FAIL ALSKDALSJD

Kibum chatted loudly with the guard and barked a few laughs. He was never good at being subtle. Jinki acknowledged this trait with silent resignation on days where they wouldn't get shot point blank by angry merchants saying 'get off ma property, ye scoundrel'.

kibum is such an ass, omfg. why is your characterization of him so ridiculous rofl.

so my comment is stupid but ok, so is onew.
pls 2 rite moar in da future, thx.

[formattitude]

haha, because he is ridiculous!

thank you for reading, and i will!

[xiahzart]

this was such a pleasure to read! you have a really comfortable and expressive writing style, very well-phrased and flowing.

your jinki is absolutely. the. end. for real, I don't even know what to say. he seems so spot-on! the last line had me laughing out loud.

and I love kibum. he is unbelievable.

thanks for writing~

[formattitude]

thank you for reading :)

[volatileflame]

so friggin' awesome! this was hilarious XD

[formattitude]

thank you for reading :)

[jongmalai]

He was starting to think that Kibum had a death wish, and was angry because he wasn't dying quickly enough.

I love love loved the witty banter and the hilarity of it, but that line just killed me for some reason. It just sounds so Key-like, I don't even know how to comment properly.

[formattitude]

thank you for reading :)

[formattitude]

thank you for reading :)