Congratulations, you have invented the functional angsty orgy! Many have tried it, but none have gotten the flavour right before this day. And making it work with fleshed out cartoon characters on top? A great feat! *applause* (I even cheered for Cartman! O,o)
Holy shit, it's like I've seen a unicorn or a leprechaun or some other mythical beast. An orgy of feelings! Seriously, though, that was awesome. I especially love Cartman, and Kenny with Cartman - the tea party memories and Kenny shielding Cartman from the worst of himself. The ending was unexpected, too, and Gary/Trent is a thing I never knew I needed until this very morning. So yeah, it's awesome and I love it/you for writing it.
Thank you! I vacillate between pride (wow I just typed 'proudness') and shame when it comes to this fic, but ultimately it was a challenge to myself and I did my best lol. I'm glad you liked the Kenny --> Cartman elements! The part in 'Kenny Dies' where Kenny mentions in his will that he feels sorry for Cartman, while simultaneously telling him that he's awful and deserves nothing from Kenny, really spoke to me, ha. Like, he's got Cartman pegged, but he's also pretty world weary in general and he's mature enough to feel sympathetic for him at times - but enough not to give him the benefit of the doubt/assume that he'll ever rise to the occasion.
Anyway, yeah, I have this whole Trent/Gary story plotted out, and maybe I'll actually write it someday. I got the first three pages done a while back! Thanks again for reading and for the note!
I'm not sure how I've managed to live my life (or at least the last 3 years of it) not having read this fic. I knew of its existence, I had just never set aside the time to read it before.
This was magnificent :) Everyone was perfectly in character, I loved Kenny in this, it was wonderfully filthy, had an actual plot thrown in, and the ending was perfect. I'm glad I finally read this...thanks for writing it!
Thanks! I'm glad you read it and liked it - I can understand how people might avoid this one because the premise is OTT and Cartman's balls are involved, but it was a fun challgenge to try to write how all of this would play out!!
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ETA: I've also recommended it on my (Norwegian) rec page: http://koe.no/?p=25 (English explanation on http://eve-n-furter.livejournal.com/44312.html) Hope that's okay.
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Anyway, yeah, I have this whole Trent/Gary story plotted out, and maybe I'll actually write it someday. I got the first three pages done a while back! Thanks again for reading and for the note!
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I love you.
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This was magnificent :) Everyone was perfectly in character, I loved Kenny in this, it was wonderfully filthy, had an actual plot thrown in, and the ending was perfect. I'm glad I finally read this...thanks for writing it!
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