Comments | forsaken: A Blueberry Muffin is Silent

forsaken

A Blueberry Muffin is Silent

Feb 08, 2002 12:11

pretty words lacerating your insignificant babbles......
Garbed in royalties purple you slander with petty lies....... and dab poet

Comments 7

redshoeson February 8 2002, 20:43:23 UTC

I like it. ^_^

Re: forsaken February 9 2002, 05:49:36 UTC

THANKS!! :)

redshoeson February 9 2002, 12:45:20 UTC

^_^ You're welcome.

anonymous March 21 2009, 11:27:36 UTC

it's not very often I come across a person who writes truly appalling poetry. Bad, yes, but never appalling.

This is a true masterpiece of the horrendous. This poetry is so bad it makes me want to slit my throat and leave the internet forever, in hopes I will never have to come across your dire and meaningless prose again.

My advice to you is to put down the Sylvia Plath and back slowly away from the metaphor dictionary. And please, never ever write again. Ever.

This poetry is so bad I almost feel like I should congratulate you.
Congratulations.

anonymous March 21 2009, 14:07:10 UTC

LOL I KNOW it is horrible. I wrote that when I was an depressed, immature high school student. It is now simply humorous.

anonymous March 21 2009, 14:10:20 UTC

That was me. Not logged in before. Actually I tried to delete or at least friend this entry and for some reason there are a few entries LJ will not let me get rid of. It gives me an error when I try to do anything with it.

I actually took the time to reread this entry and it was college, not high school and I was purposely trying to be ridiculous.

forsaken March 21 2009, 14:11:20 UTC

Third attempt to be logged in and comment here. I have a toddler on my lap and am on my husband's computer.