original fiction

[uptheapples]

You Will See Blue Again Tomorrow
We'll start with this: a house. This is where Jane lives.

Comments

[adiaaida]

I really like the style of this. it's so matter of fact; it seems disjointed, but in a good way. i'm not sure that makes sense. i'll find something to compare it to, then it'll make sense. unless you understand.

[adiaaida]

it's kinda like speak... how melinda thinks to herself... i think that's what i was going for.

[brasaremean]

i love this!

[broken__records]

I like this a lot. Especially this random line, "His shoulders fill doorways." Your phrasing and concise sentences are wonderful.

[rocketchic]

this was quirky and sweet. i really loved reading it. i like how you have this common theme of art and how it affects them both, but scott`s obviously more bitter about it having been exposed to the negative side. your style is... how can i say it, clean? (haha.) either way, i think it`s good and i love jane. ♥

[poeticgrace]

i really liked this. i think that it was really well written and just really focussed on the art. wonderful job