(Tug On My) Heartstrings for EVERYONE

Jan 11, 2015 20:24

Title: (Tug on My) Heartstrings
Recipient: Everyone
Pairing: Jongin/Chanyeol
Word Count: 5.6k
Rating: PG13
Warning(s): None
Summary: Jongin doesn’t date. Or at least he doesn’t until the new takeaway delivery guy Chanyeol makes him want to.
[Inspired by the song Paper Heart by f(x)]

monday: jinju bibimbap )

round 1, p: chanyeol/kai

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bluedreaming January 12 2015, 11:47:08 UTC
There are a lot of things I could say about this story but I think the first thing I'll say is that I really loved the way you structured the sections by food. I really love the creative things that can be done with section headers, and these made so much sense with the story. Just perfect ♡ Secondly, reading this made me feel like being snuggled up in a feather comforter and a cup of hot chocolate in front of a fire while it's snowing outside. I can't explain it, it's just comforting. Thirdly, I loved the paper cranes. What a touching thing for Jongin to do, and the way Chanyeol doesn't know the story really but he still tries to make cranes for Jongin and it's just (wipes away tears). Paper cranes always make me cry anyway; I blame this Pavlovian reflex on Sadako and the thousand paper cranes and my mom for reading it to my sisters and I as a child. I really appreciated the fact that Chanyeol was so upfront about wanting to date Jongin - it was really refreshing! Finally, straight-forward interest! I also really liked that Jongin ( ... )

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katakys January 12 2015, 21:56:32 UTC
So after this, I'm hungry but really happy. This was such a cute thing. Yeol you big puppy, really. I loved it!

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tiny_estrella January 13 2015, 04:39:25 UTC
OMFG THIA WAS LISTERALY THE UCTST GHINB EVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR. THEROI FIRST MEETING I WAS SOLD CANYEOL WAS SUCJ A CUTE CUMLZY PUPPY SO ENDERARING IN HIS EFFORTS TO WOO JONGIN
AND PUPPY JONGIN ;A; HIS BACKSPTRY WAS ;;;;;;; AND THE CRANES FO EHIS NOONA WAHT A SWEET KIDDIE ;A;A;A;A;A;A;A;A;A;A;A;AA;;A;A;;
YOU STSLY TRANSFOTEMRE THOSE TWO INTO THE SWWRTSET PUPPIES IN THE WORKD WITH THIS FIC I JUST WANT TO PLAN THEIR WEDDING AND SEE THEM LIVE HAPPYKK EVER AGTER YOU JUST MAKE IT SO EASTY TO FALL IN LOVE WITH THEM SIBS
HTANKS FOR TSHI FIC <33333

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springmaid January 14 2015, 11:16:12 UTC
Hey hey.

I just want to say this is the cutest thing I've read in this exchange so far.
+ YOU GET ME. CHANYEOL HAS LONG, ELEGANT FINGERS.
Indeed, he has. Indeed. <3

This story is so cute, especially at the beginning when you mentioned Seokjin! BTS SEOKJIN IS KAWAII. :3 And Chanyeol tripping everywhere then trying to be cool and whatnot the next day. OTL How can he pick up an adult so easily I will never know, but at least 4 year age gap is nothing. :3 + he drives a car! Do you even know how hot I imagined that to be? Like....his fingers are on the steering wheel, gripping it tightly. oh my god.

The idea of paper cranes are cute too. :333

Glad they got together in the end!

P.S. Now I'm craving for korean food.

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teatimetaemint January 18 2015, 12:09:39 UTC
Frick, this was ridiculously adorable and kind of wistful at the same time. It's hard to describe, but there was just the right mix of fluff and humor and romance and sad background story and I really love the whole package ( ... )

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