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"The Wake is Slow to Rise" - Spock/Uhura - PG

Aug 06, 2009 13:09

Title: The Wake is Slow to Rise
characters: Spock/Uhura
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Spock enjoys all of the details of Uhura's morning mannerisms.
Warning: I brought cotton candy for you all because I hope you enjoy fluff. There's a tonnnn of it in here.

Inspiration: I listened to "Daughter of the Sun" by Matthew Santos the entire time I wrote this. ( Read more... )

fan fic: star trek

Comments 30

new_hillbilly August 6 2009, 17:53:55 UTC

Ahhh..... how sensual! I LOVE it when they admire each other!

forthisreason August 6 2009, 18:21:05 UTC

Hi there!

I was really trying to go for a very calm sensual route because that's what I think is sexiest of all. Glad you enjoyed it!

brianneh August 6 2009, 18:12:49 UTC

wow. This was amazing.

forthisreason August 6 2009, 18:23:10 UTC

Thank you for that amazing comment. Makes me flutter. :)

misscam August 6 2009, 18:22:18 UTC

I love the slow pace and sensual feel to this, and Spock's observations manages to be quite logical in tone and quite sweet at the same time. Nice read :)

forthisreason August 6 2009, 18:23:52 UTC

Thanks for reading :D

blcwriter August 6 2009, 18:26:02 UTC

I love the slow tenderness of this. Lovely.

forthisreason August 6 2009, 18:30:10 UTC

Let it simmer. :)

Thank you.

kapellmeister August 6 2009, 20:09:32 UTC

Beautiful. :-) I absolutely loved:

Just as his heart flutters (he'll never admit it does),

Very poetic and sensual while still being Spock.

forthisreason August 6 2009, 21:48:37 UTC

Aww, I'm glad. My only concern with this is that it wasn't quite Spock enough, but it's very dream like, especially with the tense I used (which I never use...I was checking everythinnnnggg).

Thanks!